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comments on Zeke's 2nd Draft

Here are my comments on Zeke's Post www.norcal4life.typepad.com

Download the_din_21.htm Here is Draft  #2 version 1. I plan on going back to the Library of Congress get more info on primary sources. Then it is back to NARA and trying to track down the letter of Colonel Gregg. I found out that the letters of Thomas Keam are in CA. That's too far for me.

These are my thoughts on Ezekiel's workDownload the_sins_of_clark01.htm

The Big Paper

Download the_big_paper_web_version.mht  Here is the First Draft of 'The Big Paper'

Looks like a good outline. You are getting some good information and should be able to flesh your paper out. One thing... look at the teacher's web site for information on making your post into a webpage. comment on ramirez's outline

Outline

Download preliminary_outline_03.htm Here is my primitive outline. THis is taking a bit o fighting.

Here is my attempt at posting a web page it should be the Bibliography. Download bibliography_02.mht

It worked!   :)

comment on post of M. Perry

This is my comment on Perry's Blog#4

About the thesis statement. If prostitution is not done for profit, then why is it done? I had the idea that there was always a business reason for the activity. Maybe the women were not seeing the money, but somebody was getting paid.

mperry

Thesis

Comment #4

I have visited the National Archives in Washington and I now realize the depths of the information I am looking for. It is akin to looking for a piece of straw in a hay stack. Thus I intend to use secondary sources for most of my information on the causes of Navajo success. After talking to some of the staff at the Archives I have been informed that most decisions of congress are really made at the agency or bureau level. Hence congress mainly authorizes what the beaurocrates decide. In the case of Indian reservations it is the Bureau of Indian Affairs (BIA) that has the best information. Color me a little more informed.

The working thesis is: The Navajo succeeded in increasing their respective reservation lands because of a combination of their understanding of Anglo-American culture as well as support for them within the government of the U.S.